I read an article in the paper one day about a foreign exchange student who visited Wyoming. One of his observations: Every dog has a pickup!
I loved that. How creative. Why didn’t I think of that? Anyway, a poem began forming in my head and I grabbed my IPAD to record it. I have read it at an open mic night at our annual WyoPoets workshop, and at my local writers group. Now I share it with all of you.
EVERY DOG HAS A PICKUP
That dog has a pickup
In the driver’s seat he sits
I’ll bet if I got close I’d see
A gun upon his hip
Now I see he’s a cow dog
There’s evidence of that
Just notice that long rifle
And the lariat on the rack
His blue eyes watch intently
The door of Molly’s Bar
Hoping soon his wrangler Jim
Can make it from that far
‘Cause sometimes when the day is done
And the dusty wind dies down
He hops into the pickup truck
And Jim drives them to town
He’s bitten dusty dirty heels
Got kicked a time or two
And helped Old Jim his partner
Wrangle cows ‘till day was through
So now old Jim is tipping
A beer or maybe more
And though a dog is patient
Sitting still is such a bore
The pickup window’s open
So he can get some air
His ears perk up as the bar door creaks
Perhaps Jim will be there
The door was only swinging
From a playful gust of wind
He sighs and turns his head away
Then I see a doggy grin
As a muddy rancher’s pick up
From the west comes driving up
And a cowgirl exits one side
On the other there’s a pup
Then by the pup another
Larger set of ears are turning
Toward his open window
And his whine belies his yearning
For the brown-eyed sheltie gazes
Back into the Aussie’s blue’s
And the pup beside her yips
Unaware he’s blue-eyed too
And so the two dog ranchers
Sit in their 4 x 4’s
Now gazing at each other
Never mind the old bar doors.
By the time you read this, we will be camping in the Rockies near an old ghost town where Amelia Earhart was building a log cabin when she disappeared. The cabin was never finished.
What a great images in this poem. I loved it! You are right, never would have thought of it. Thanks!
Doris
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I was camping when this published so didn’t get to read replies until tonight. Thanks for the comment!
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Dogs are the best people on the planet!
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You are right! They are everything we should be, unconcerned about appearances, very forgiving and sometimes humble acting. Thanks for the comment!
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Love your poem. Our dogs always have sat in the driver’s seat when we’ve gone inside anywhere. We go into the truck stop for a shower and come out they are still there. No matter if we’re in there for a few minutes or a long time, when we return the dog is there waiting patiently. Love the little romantic twist, and I know you’re going to have a story about your adventures when you return. Thanks. Cher’ley
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Thanks Cherley, since romance is in most of my stories this poem just flowed right into it. I wrote it in a couple minutes. Thanks for the comments.
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That was such fun to read; the little twist at the end really made me smile. Thanks for making a beautiful Saturday morning even brighter.
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Thank you Marian! You are such an inspiration. I returned from our camping just last night so had 10 days without internet and ability to read these blogs/comments. Really appreciate your reading it and commenting. This poem just fell from my mind and was fun to do.
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That was quite an unexpected though heartwarming ending, Neva. Your holiday venue sounds full of ‘tales of the unexpected’ – have fun and maybe solve a mystery or two!
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Thanks for the comments Nancy. I always like happy and surprising endings if I can provide them. This poem didn’t start out as a romance but it sure flowed into one.
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Nothing like a good dog poem or story. When you get back from your camping trip, want to hear more on Amelia Earhart and that unfinished cabin. Any chance of a photo of the cabin’s remains?
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We arrived home last night and would have liked to still have been there today as the dude ranch where Amelia stayed a month with her husband and from where she commissioned building the cabin was having an Amelia Earhart day and she was rumored to be there at the dude ranch cabin where she stayed to talk to people. (So they must have found her?) LOL. I will write more in future blogs. The cabin she commissioned was only 4 logs high when she disappeared so was never finished.
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The poem gave me a good laugh. Have fun camping.
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THanks Abbie. We had great fun and future blogs will share some of that. Glad you got a laugh from the poem! Thanks for the comments.
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Loved the poem. I’ve seen plenty of Aussie’s my in area too. Great dogs.
Have fun camping.
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Thanks Kate. Aussie’s are great dogs, loyal and beautiful. We did have fun camping!
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I never tire of hearing this fun poem you’ve created, Neva! Creativity comes from so many sources — you are so “in tune” with your surroundings and with your creative side! Looking forward to seeing you when you get back from your outdoor adventure!
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Thanks Gayle. You are always so affirming and encouraging! Your gift for sure. Will see you soon.
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Great Poem, Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you! It was a fun thing that just appeared as I wrote it! That young student must have had a creative mind to come up with that statement which I borrowed for my inspiration.
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Dog in trucks equals pure joy.
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That statement sounds like some interesting stories lie behind it! Got some to share on future blogs? Thanks for reading.
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